Friday, April 5, 2013

Review: A Touch Mortal


A Touch Mortal
A Touch Mortal by Leah Clifford

My rating: 4 of 5 stars



Please note: I read this book in March 2011 from a copy I received through Amazon Vine in exchange for an honest review. I'm just adding some formatting and this disclosure.

Reading Level: Young Adult (16 and up)
Triggers: talk of suicide
Recommended for: older teen readers, especially girls; those to whom this idea appeals.

My Synopsis: Things had been great for Eden until the last few months. Suddenly none of her friends are calling anymore; her parents barely acknowledge her and it looks like her last year in school is going to be a rough one. Just as she is contemplating ways to end it all, she notices a pair of boys on the beach. One of them - Az - she is immediately smitten with. He is likewise taken with her and they are enjoying being in one another's company when the second boy - Gabriel - discovers something terrifying ... Eden has no destiny. She has no Path. She is a Sider - one who, after dying, will come back to life and continue to live in a sort of half-life state. Oh, and Gabriel is an angel, Az a fallen angel, and there are demons hunting for any Siders they can find.

My Thoughts: It is hard to go into much more detail at this point, as I don't want to spoil things for the readers. As is mentioned on the back cover of the book and in various descriptions, Eden has strange powers - more and different than the average Sider - and this makes her like crack to the demons. Seemingly betrayed on all sides, she has to strike out on her own and remain hidden from the demons as much as she can.

My Recommendations: I liked this story - it's a lower reading level than I normally indulge in (Young adult level), but it was well-written and intriguing. I think older teen girls - 16 and up - would like the story. It's a bit dark, with all the talk of suicide, for younger Young Adult readers, in my humble opinion. Not a bad book overall - give it a read.



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Review: God's War


God's War
God's War by Kameron Hurley

My rating: 4 of 5 stars



Book Info: Genre: Dark fiction (science-fantasy)
Reading Level: Adult (F/F relationships)
Recommended for: People who like dark and strange stories that are beautifully written
Trigger Warnings: murder, decapitation

My Thoughts: The world that Kameron Hurley creates for Umayma is dark, dreary, and unremittingly ugly with the constant wars, biological agents, and diseases. The various people are all “People of the Book,” (what sounds to me to be a form of Islam) but since they each interpret things differently, consider the others to be infidels, to be converted to the “true way” or destroyed. So far that sounds pretty depressingly familiar, doesn't it? What is it about religion that makes people so incredibly crazy?

Anyway, this is a very dark and often extremely depressing book, but in the end I think it is worth reading just because it is so beautifully written. Plus there are some really interesting ideas in this book, and I can see where there are some really twisted threads running through it. I really must see where this story goes. There are two more books available in this series, Infidel and Rapture, and I'll be reading and reviewing those next, so watch for those reviews. If you like dark stories with a deep thread running through, check these stories out.

Disclosure: I bought this book for myself a couple years ago. All opinions are my own.

Synopsis: Nyx had already been to hell. One prayer more or less wouldn't make any difference...

On a ravaged, contaminated world, a centuries-old holy war rages, fought by a bloody mix of mercenaries, magicians, and conscripted soldiers. Though the origins of the war are shady and complex, there's one thing everybody agrees on...

There's not a chance in hell of ending it. 

Nyx is a former government assassin who makes a living cutting off heads for cash. But when a dubious deal between her government and an alien gene pirate goes bad, Nyx's ugly past makes her the top pick for a covert recovery. The head they want her to bring home could end the war—but at what price? 

The world is about to find out.



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Thursday, April 4, 2013

"Twice Shy" by Patrick Freivald just 99 cents this weekend! Soon available: "Special Dead" the sequel


Some of you may remember me raving about this book, Twice Shy, in my review in October (linked here). Today I had a huge thrill when I learned the 2nd book in this series, Special Dead, is to be released soon (details by clicking link on title, which will take you to Journalstone). Then, just to make things better, I heard today from the author that Twice Shy is on sale for only 99 cents on Amazon this weekend! That's right, you can pick up this excellent and awesome book for only 99 cents for a limited time, so hurry on over now and pick it up! Just click this link to be conveniently taken right to Amazon where you can buy your very own copy! I've also linked to the Journalstone store on the book titles, if you prefer to buy directly from the publisher, but the sale is only on Amazon.


And, just for fun, here is the cover for the upcoming Special Dead. Enjoy! Go ye forth and buy!


Attention Writers and Poets!: ChiZine Publications Rannu Fund Submissions now open!

I just learned that the 2013 CZP (ChiZine Publications)/Rannu Fund Award is now open to submissions of fiction and poetry through May 31, 2013.  I had been told the following by the ChiZine representative. 

 Cory Doctorow and Neil Gaiman are the tie-breaking judges for fiction and poetry, respectively! 
So, if you want to submit something to the contest, here is where you should go.

According to that site, here is some info about the contest.


In Memoriam
Erich Rannu
January 2, 1922 - April 4, 2013 
Founded July 8, 2008 by Sandra Kasturi and Brett Alexander Savory, co-publishers of ChiZine Publications and ChiZine: Treatments of Light and Shadin Words in honour of the thirtieth wedding anniversary of Sandra's mother and step-father, and their contributions to the arts and education both in Canada and Estonia.
 The Fund, brought to you in collaboration with ChiZine Publications, offers two awards per year of $500 CDN each, one for fiction, one for poetry, granted to two writers of speculative literature (i.e., science fiction, fantasy, horror, magic realism, surrealism, etc.), of any nationality/place of residence, at any stage of their career. Please see the guidelines for more information. 

For more information, see the Entry Rules page here. Or click on the guidelines link above.

And if you enter?  Best of luck!

Rhemalda Presents Cover Reveal: "A Change of Plans" by Donna K. Weaver

For release on June 1, 2013 by Rhemalda Publishing, A Change of Plans by Donna K. Weaver. Link on the title is to the book's Goodreads page; please do add it to your shelves over there if you're interested!

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Book Details:

Author: Donna K. Weaver (author website: http://donnakweaver.com)

Genre: Adventure Romance

Publication Date: Jun 1, 2013

Publisher: Rhemalda Publishing (publisher website: http://www.rhemalda.com)

Book Description:

When Lyn sets off on her supposedly uncomplicated and unromantic cruise, she never dreams it will include pirates. 

All the 25-year-old, Colorado high school teacher wants to do is forget that her dead fiancĂ© was a cheating scumbag. Lyn plans a vacation diversion; fate provides Braedon, an intriguing surgeon. She finds herself drawn to him: his gentle humor, his love of music, and even his willingness to let her take him down during morning karate practices. Against the backdrop of the ship’s make-believe world and temporary friendships, her emotions come alive. 

However, fear is an emotion, too. Unaware of the sensitive waters he's navigating, Braedon moves to take their relationship beyond friendship--on the very anniversary Lyn is on the cruise to forget. Lyn's painful memories are too powerful, and she runs from Braedon and what he has to offer.

Their confusing relationship is bad enough, but when the pair finds themselves on one of the cruise's snorkeling excursions in American Samoa things get worse. Paradise turns to piracy when their party is kidnapped and Lyn's fear of a fairytale turns grim. Now she must fight alongside the man she rejected, first for their freedom and then against storms, sharks, and shipwreck.

Author Bio:

Donna K. Weaver is a Navy brat who joined the Army and has lived in Asia and Europe. Because she sailed the Pacific three times as a child, she loves cruising and wishes she could accrue enough vacation time to do more of it with her husband.
At fifty, Donna decided to study karate and earned her black belt in Shorei Kempo.
After recording city council minutes for twenty years, Donna decided to write something a little longer and with a lot more emotion--and kissing.
Donna and her husband reside in Utah, they have six children and eight grandchildren who live all over the world.

Finally, check it out, I have a trailer for you to watch!

Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Review: The Seams Between The Stars


The Seams Between The Stars
The Seams Between The Stars by Kameron Hurley

My rating: 4 of 5 stars



I found this short story free on-line at this site, where you can download it in PDF or from Smashwords. This is a prequel short story in the Bel Dame Apocrypha, which I am going to read as soon as I've read the two free short stories available on-line.

This is a desolate science fiction story. I imagine a lot of the themes will make more sense to me once I've read the first full book, God's War. The writing is gorgeous. If you like sci-fi and enjoy a sort of desolate, war-torn universe, check out this series by reading these free shorts.



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We Gotta Get Out of This Habit


So, today I'm switching gears a little and will actually be writing content! Yes, I know, it's incredible... Today, I want to talk to you about a grammatical laziness that is rife throughout society, and that's the use of the words “got” and “get”.

See, when I was in grade school, I had this really wonderful teacher for both grades 3 and 5 (she recently passed away from brain cancer. RIP Mrs. Johannes). I recall her telling us that the use of “got” and “get” is almost always unnecessary, superfluous, and/or lazy, and she told us a story about a professor that would literally take out a pair of scissors and excise every use of those words from student's papers. When I started editing, I didn't really pay attention to this at first, but in the past several months I have started to, and she was so right.

Take these sentences for instance:
I've got to get going.

You've got to be kidding.

They had to get home.

Fairly typical usage. However, think about what those sentences are doing, and take “got” and “get out, and see what happens.
I have to leave now.

You have to be kidding or alternately You must be joking.

They had to return home.

You see how much better that sounds? Do yourself a favor and start to be aware of your use of these words. Try to deliberately remove them from your speech and writing patterns, and see how much cleaner it all sounds. Start a new habit—a habit of using correct grammar!

Eden 100 Copy giveaway!


Announcement from shareAread!!




We are thrilled to announce that the amazing

Janelle Stalder has become a part of the shareAread Family. So in order to

celebrate this event we are launching a huge giveaway.


shareAread and Janelle Stalder are giving away

100 copies, yes!!! You read that right
100 E-copies of Eden by Janelle Stalder
This means that there are going to be
100 winners!!!!!
What do we ask in exchange, well all you have to do is fill the always useful raffle at the bottom and if you win a copy that you give it a super honest review!!!!

Pretty simple right???


This is the first

title of an amazing series that creates an exceptional

story where worlds collide, tensions mount, love ensues, and war escalates.


I swear this book has everything you are looking for and then some: 

Amazing character development

A sexy bad boy

Incredible world building

A book perfect for all ages





Description of Eden:


Trapped within the cruel world of hormones and bullies, fifteen-year-old Aiden is convinced life has more to offer him. His instincts are proven correct on the night he is awakened by a voice calling to him from outside his window. As he sleepily peers into his yard, his eyes slowly focus on a woman who says she is there to take him to Eden. Aiden is about to fulfill the life purpose he never knew he had.

It is in Eden, a land on the brink of war, where Aiden will finally learn to trust himself and those around him. Accompanied by Wolf, his sidekick Logan, and the beautiful archer, Elisa, Aiden is soon thrust into a battle to save Eden. Meanwhile Elisa, the only girl in the King's Army, is in the midst of her own struggles. Betrothed to a man she has no intention of marrying, Elisa is caught between the need to prove herself and her desire for true happiness. And now that she has met Aiden, she is more confused than ever.

In this action-packed fantasy tale, romance, adventure, and intrigue surround
Aiden as he learns just what he is capable of when he discovers confidence and
courage.







About the Author


Janelle Stalder was born and raised in Brampton, Ontario. At an early age she developed a love for literature. Her debut novel, Eden, was the first book in a series of four, released in September of 2011. The second book, Eden-West, was released in July of 2012, and the third book, Eden-South was released in March of 2013. The fourth book of the Eden Series, Eden-East, will be release at the end of 2013. She is a strong supporter of other indie authors, and loves to interact with her readers. When she’s not writing, Janelle is at home with her husband, two children, Aiden and Elora, and her two furry children, Alice and Lily. She now resides in the small town of Orangeville, Ontario in her old, possibly haunted, century home.


Visit her blog at janellestalder.tumblr.com for updates on her books, and follow her on Twitter at @jmstalder.

The Eden Series can be purchased on Amazon and Barnes & Noble, and most other major retailers where books are sold.

Author Links
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Now is giveaway time please fill the raffle below and we wish you all the best of luck!!!


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Please note: Now is Gone is not responsible for providing winners their e-books. I am only hosting this giveaway for shareAread.  Good luck!

Tuesday, April 2, 2013

Book Feature and Guest Post by John Vamvas and Olga Montes, authors of "Wherewolves"

Today, Now is Gone welcomes John Vamvas and Olga Montes, the authors of the new book Wherewolves.  From the synopsis: "Using a fun, explosive style, full of new slang and fresh dialogue, WHEREWOLVES is the story of a group of high school seniors, most “military brats”, who are headed for an army-type survival weekend."

One reviewer described it as Lord of the Flies vs Silver Bullet.

After the guest post, I'll include some more information about the authors and the book.  Now, without further ado...


Hello, we are John Vamvas and Olga Montes, authors of the recently released horror/thriller, WHEREWOLVES.

WHEREWOLVES (yes, the H is deliberate) is the story of a group of high school seniors—most of them military brats—and their teacher, The Sarge, who go on a survival training weekend and must face their biggest enemy: themselves. It's thought-provoking, edge-of-your-seat intense, and action-packed. We approached the topical issue of bullying with edgy, layered characters and plot twists that will keep you guessing.

The rapid-fire story was originally a screenplay we completed in 2010. A few days after it was written, we sent it to a producer we were acquainted with and within a week, she optioned the script; she said the story blew her away. Things were rolling. Then, just over a year later, it all fell apart.

We then started to send out query letters to agents and producers and were lucky enough to get literary representation (Whitt Brantley at WBMT Agency). But getting a screenplay off the ground takes a lot of time. So, we decided to write the novel based on the screenplay in the meantime. We really want to get the story out, and readers thus far have responded with high enthusiasm.

We have written critically acclaimed plays, teleplays, and screenplays, but this is our first stab at novel writing. We've been asked over and again what it was like to turn a script into a novel, so here goes: It's been a thrilling/terrifying/overwhelming challenge, to say the least.

Screenwriting is all about creating the skeleton that the actors, director, cinematographer, sound, lights, etc. will shape and make unique.  This time, though, we got to be everyone, feel everyone, see and smell everything. Amazing. It took nine months of sleeplessness to come up with a first draft. We gave it to a few people to read. Some loved it. Some thought something was missing. All had corrections.

We decided to get a professional opinion and searched for an editor on line. We stumbled on a Saskatoon writer/poet/editor, Shelley A. Leedahl, who was familiar with our writing style. We wrote her asking if she could edit a novel that has the film feel; meaning, our writing is intense, the dialogue is quick, the slang is fresh, and the descriptions blend with the action. The story moves, just like a movie reel. She said, "Send it over." And we did. We were confident. Maybe a little cocky—I think we were looking for a professional pat on the back. We got our manuscript back four weeks later. We expected to find circled a few typos here, a couple of commas missing there. Ha! Ha! What we got were notes. Plenty of them ("Work harder!", "Whose POV are you in?", "This section is boring! Cut it!", etc.), and pen marks littering almost every page. Plus a detailed 20 page report. We almost cried. But all her notes were in keeping with our writing style—not hers. She was pointing us in the right direction. The task seemed daunting but we took it one page at a time. The hardest part was the narration and making sure that the changes in point of view were clear and flowed smoothly. Soon, the task turned into an exciting challenge.  And we were flying. We came up with our second (we thought final) draft. And sent it back to her—still looking for that pat on the back. Two weeks later, we got more (but not as many) notes. We were, according to her, well on our way.

Hiring a professional editor was, we think, an awesome decision for our novel. She was relentless (and we love her for it). We felt she sat perched on our shoulders scrutinizing every correction. She pushed us well beyond what we thought we were capable of.

Lucky for us, we found an editor who knows how to bring out the writer's best. Not who changes things as she would write them.

We hope you enjoy reading WHEREWOLVES as much as we enjoyed writing it.

Thank you very much for taking the time to get to know us,

John and Olga

And I say:
As a freelance editor, I must say I think you're right!  Sounds like you partnered up with a great editor.  As you say, what we are supposed to do is to make your writing better, not try to make your writing sound like our own!

Now, to help you know the authors a bit more, here is some info about them.


Together for over 20 years, John and Olga started as an acting team but soon began to write their own scripts for lack of finding two-person plays they could tour across North America. They wrote and toured four full-length critically acclaimed plays to packed houses across Canada and the United States, including, Bad Boy, which they performed Off-Off-Broadway at New York’s Creative Place Theatre in the heart of Times Square.

In 2001, they were approached to star in and rewrite the short film, Things Never Said in Playa Perdida. Playa won the audience award at the New York Short Film Festival in 2002 and tied first place at the Festivalisimo festival in Montreal.

WHEREWOLVES was written as a screenplay in 2010. They wrote the novel to get the story out while they wait for it to hit the screens.

ABOUT JOHN VAMVAS

John Vamvas grew up in one of Montreal's (Canada) roughest boroughs. His high school teachers always told him that he'd be in jail or dead by eighteen. Thank God for the Arts. Actor, playwright, screenwriter and now novelist, he has been writing with his writing partner/wife, Olga Montes, for over twenty years. He loves words, especially dialogue, and has a lot of fun coming up with new ways to say the same thing.

ABOUT OLGA MONTES

Mother, preschool French teacher, avid reader, Olga dreamed of being a writer as a child and spent many high school lunch hours working on her writing with her English teacher. She has a college degree in Professional Theatre and a university degree in Spanish and French grammar and literature. She was on her way to becoming a translator for the UN when she heard of an open audition at one of Montreal's biggest theatres. She almost didn't get the role, though, because the director and co-star, John Vamvas, was scared of falling in love with the actress and ruining the play. That was 1992. She and John have been writing and working together on stage, screen, and in life ever since.

“BANG-ON DIALOGUE. Vamvas and Montes make it look, sound, smell real.” The Edmonton Journal

“IMPRESSIVE TALENT in this writing/producing/acting team”, The Winnipeg Free Press

“Montes and Vamvas continue to demonstrate their skills with SWITCHBLADE-SHARP EARS FOR DIALOGUE and hard, thoroughly believable plot lines.” The Sunday Journal

“A SEXY and EXPLOSIVE style that pulls the patrons forward to the edge of their seats”, The Edmonton” Journal

“RAZOR-SHARP LINES” SEE Magazine

BLURB:

A group of high school seniors and their teacher, The Sarge, go on a survival training weekend and must face their biggest enemy: themselves. A growl they hear and one by one they disappear. What is out there? Can it really be werewolves?

A fresh take on bullying told using a fun, rapid-fire style; with edgy, layered characters and a plot twist with as much depth as impact.
Thought provoking. Intense. Action packed.
 AMAZON REVIEWS:
"5 stars. It reminded me a bit of Lord of the Flies versus Silver Bullet but only way cooler."
"5 stars. Finally! A thriller that is unpredictable. A real page turner that expertly knows how to balance dialogue and description."
"There is plenty of action in this book to keep anyone happy."
"Chillingly terrifying... This is one horror novel that will have you thinking long after you've finished reading."
 Link to cover, author bios and pics, book excerpt (first two chapters), synopsis, and reviews: www.wherewolvestheblog.com
Twitter: @WHEREWOLVESfilm https://twitter.com/WHEREWOLVESfilm


Monday, April 1, 2013

Book Review: "The Lost": Celestial Blues #2 by Vicki Pettersson



The Lost review
Author: Vicki Pettersson
5 out of 5 stars

Book Info: Genre: Urban Fantasy/Noir
Reading Level: Adult
Recommended for: fans of urban fantasy, Noir, Rockabilly lifestyle, paranormal romantic suspense
Trigger Warnings: drug use, abuse, and overdose; gangster/mobsters; murder

My Thoughts: I have to say that I think I would probably kill for a car like Kit's. I looked it up and the Duetto is just a gorgeous piece of machinery.


I was really impressed by a bit of detail I noticed in the story, and that is Sergei and Yulyia Kolyadenko. Sergei is described as being from Kiev, and Kolyadenko is a proper Ukranian name. Not every author would take the time to make sure they had the correct regional name!

The drug mentioned in this story, krokodil (street name for desomorphine) is just as nasty as described. If you do a Google image search, you will find image after image of people with the flesh literally rotted off and exposing their bones. It's a truly nasty drug. You would think, “why would someone do that to themselves?” but this drug is the type that is almost instantly addictive. It takes about a half hour to cook it up, and the high lasts only 90 minutes, so once a person has taken that first hit, they're pretty much doomed unless they have the stamina to last through the month it takes to clear out of their system. The fact that people created this thing just blows my mind, and that fact that other people are willing to make their living by basically destroying other people with this sort of drug... it's a terrible thing. I found a very interesting video (and short article), which I've linked here (for sites that allow links and formatting) if you're interested in learning more.

As to the story itself... like the first book, this sort of crossed the urban fantasy/noir/romantic suspense genre lines. However, this book is much more action-based than the first, since most of the characters have already been established in that first book, and the romance aspect is even more subdued, since Grif and Kit are actually together in this book. It's an enjoyable story, and I'm definitely liking the overall story arc of the series, in addition to the specific stories in the books. This is a series I will absolutely be continuing! Recommended!

Series Information: The Lost is the second book in the Celestial Blues series.
Book 1: The Taken, read and reviewed in September, 2012. Review linked here where formatting allowed.

Disclosure: I received an ARC copy of this book from the Amazon Vine program in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.

Synopsis: Griffin Shaw and his wife were both murdered fifty years ago. Now a minor angel, Grif's been granted permission to solve the mystery of his own death... if he helps the Pure angels guide those souls who might otherwise be Lost.

Souls like Jeap Yang, a drug addict in his final moments of life. Grif knows that death is coming, but he cannot intervene. However, Grif's mortal lover, reporter Katherine "Kit" Craig, isn't constrained by angelic protocol. If she can stop a death, she will.

But as Kit is about to find out, there are things more traumatic and evil than murder. A strange new drug is literally eating tweakers' flesh from their bones, and Kit's crusade to get it off the streets is set to propel her and Grif into a battle with a vicious drug cartel. They'll have to scramble to stay alive, stay together, and choose their own fate... before it's chosen for them.